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How lucky am I? In addition to getting to enjoy the fabulous 4th of July
fireworks here in New York, I've also had the good fortune of seeing an
excellent headline in action on a sign touting a parking garage near the
Garment District:
[paraphrased] "No, there really isn't a better spot around the corner.
Park here for just $XX."
If you live in a large city (or frankly, anywhere with a high-traffic,
low-parking ratio), you know this scenario all too well.
"Hmmm, honey, should I park here or try around the corner? Surely
there's got to be something better." You turn the corner, oh so hopeful,
only to find that no, there are no spots, and in fact, you've just
passed up your only shot for the next 5 city blocks. Misery (also known
as endless circling with no reward) ensues.
Good headlines always speak the language of your prospects. This one in
particular uses normal drivers' everyday speech to capture their
attention and pull in lots of business.
:: Posted by Jennifer McCay on Wednesday, November 16, 2005 in Copywriting :: Permanent Link :: ::